Level 109:
 - Dialogue (...): "the Koopa Guardian;" should be "the Koopa Guardian,". No semicolon after "lowered;". Change "destination;" to "destination,", Move the period of "Mute City." outside of the quotes.
 - Dialogue (...): No comma after "Koopa Guardian,". Remove all semicolons.
 - Dialogue (...): What ever is one word as "whatever".
 - Dialogue (Transmission): "Yes he does" should be "Yes, he does".
 - Dialogue (Transmission): Remove semicolon after "bigger question;"
 - Dialogue (Trans.): "Well the" should be "Well, the"
 - Dialogue (Mute): Remove "it looks like?"
 - Dialogue (Trans.): Add "down" to "sit down and relax".
 - Dialogue (Mute): Add comma after "after all, I guess".
 - Dialogue (Trans): Change ; to , on "where you are;". Change "they're" to "there". Remove the 2nd semicolon.
 - Dilaogue (Trans): Remove the semicolon after "train;". Change "me and Lumine" to "Lumine and I"
 - Dialogue (Trans): Remove first semicolon on "hurry;" and change the second one to a semicolon on "time now;"
 - Dialogue (Mute): Add a comma after "Alright"
 - Dialogue (Trans): Remove ; after "spotted you;"
 - Dialogue (Mute): Period at the last statement.
 - Screen 4: How exactly do I warp to 49?

Level 16E:
 - Screen 1: Too many powerups remove this one.

Level 49:
 - Screen 12: Coins are arced in a way that seems to never be able to be collected.

Level 9:
 - Screen 4: It's possible to get stuck here on the (8,A) in the bottom. Just remove that ability to get stuck there.
 - Screen C: Palettes on Coins look ugly.
 - Screen E: An indication of a midway point would be nice to see. Midpoint is reobtainable if dead after the midpoint.
 - Screen 1A: One powerup, not 2.

Level 1E:
 - Screen 3: Palette on Blue Shyguy looks bad.

Level B8:
 - Screen A: 1-Up is too easy to get.

Level B9:
 - Screen 1B: Palette on midpoint outline looks bad. Red bouncing things have a wrong ExAnim tile. Shy Guy outline looks bad.
 - Screen 12: Screen keeps scrolling even though at the top.

Level 143:
 - Screen 3: Shy Guy outline again.

Level 15:
 - Overall: I'm not sure which walls can be wall-jumped and which ones cannot be. There's really only one place where the wall-jump is absolutely necessary and that's at Screen 5 but the rest is not. Spikes don't look as good as they could, graphically wise.
 - Screen F: Midpoint reappears if restarted there.

Level B2:
 - Overall: Spikes seem to be really hard to see and the BG yellow is a bit too bright.